Improving but not there yet.

“How wonderful it is that nobody need wait a single moment before starting to improve the world.”  Anne Frank

Surprise... more major changes but still not feeling finished to me.  I wanted to post it here though before I start painting again in a few moments. I told my Mentor that it still felt 'trite'... not fresh and a bit without but I am not sure what.

The painting this past weekend was amazing. I did not want to stop. I wanted to push on but I see now it is still too literal. 

"For where your treasure is, there your heart will be also." Matthew 6:21